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The Flaying of Marsyas
By patterjack
06 June 2008
A cruel myth , capable of many interpretations.

The  Flaying of Marsyas
                             
The rotting hide flutters at its untidy edges
solidly nailed upon the thick tree bole.
Nailheads weep rust to mingle with the blood
that  stains the earth below dark brown.

No chords from a triumphant lyre now resonate
and the breath of the defeated flute is stilled.
The nymphs have departed weeping, and sly Apollo,
satisfied with his cheating victory,  has left the field.

As the satyr bled from the tracery of the flensing knives,
suspended from the tree as they sliced through his flesh
did his wild cries of  Why  do you  tear  me  from  myself  ?
send a jolt of remorse through judges and opponent ?

The modes of music have changed :
but Apollonian  and  Dionysian still conflict.
The matriarchs had for that time lost the battle
but did half man disjoint from sacrificed beast?

Olympus joined with hubristic curse and envy
in the attempt to replace a system of belief,
but  much of the earlier spirit still survives
In the river of tears created by his mourners.

Is  there a final judgment on god and satyr ?

Reviews

Written by Mr_E_Writer (225 comments posted) 6th June 2008
Apart from the word 'solidly', I thought that the first stanza was very graphic and spoke volumes. 
However, although there were a few other isolated lines that I felt drawn to, as a whole the poem did nothing for me. 
Sorry, 
Eric.
classical background
Written by fellpony (1749 comments posted) 6th June 2008
is needed to pursue the layers of meaning in this one. I didn't know Marsyas' story so I went and looked him up - gruesome, and yes, Apollo did cheat, rotten sod. Your references to the earlier religion that Marsyas (in some versions) represents, are maybe too abstruse here. I had to do a lot of looking up before I got your point.  
 
Final judgement on gods? well, in this case, as with so many Greek myths, don't trust the bastards! Don't compete! They get their own way, whether by power, skill or cheating!

Written by Mr_E_Writer (225 comments posted) 6th June 2008
A classical background! 
I once auditioned for the position of 2nd cello with the RPO, does that count? 
Although I'll be honest and admit that I much prefer avante-garde and fusion jazz. 
Each to their own!

Written by Veronica_Milvus (768 comments posted) 6th June 2008
As fellpony says, the god will always win! That would be the final judgement. I also had to go and look up the story, so thanks for the education. 
 
The first stanza I thought was very strong, a great picuture of the untidy edges of the flayed skin (eeewww) and the rusting nail heads. Sounds like the displayed hide has already been there for some time, maybe. 
 
I see what you are saying about the triumph of the patriarchal classical Greek religion over the matriarchal pagan. I believe, on the authority of Wikipedia, the goddess involved here was Athene, so it is probably fitting that Apollo wins. Although the world might have looked rather different, mythologically, if it had gone the other way.

Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 6th June 2008
The first verse, and especially the first two lines, are excellent. Someone, above, said graphic. Perfect description. Had to look this one up too but still got a little lost in the last two. Perhaps I've not got Sue's researching staying power. 
 
Phil

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