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WE MISS YOU MAMMAN
By JohnnyD
06 June 2008

Your limitless love
Caring nature
Amazing smile
Joyful laugh
Always giving nature
Making everyone happy
Enjoying every single moment of life
Your omnipresence
Well, we miss you so much Mamman!

Beautiful memories
Joyous moments
Those loving gifts
Delicious cooking
Lively phone calls
Prayers for happy life
Engulfing us in your arms
Your presence
We miss you so much Mamman!
                                                                  

Johnny D
5th June 2008
   

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Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 6th June 2008
There is not much more that I can say but "How lovely to have someone to miss you so much when you are dead." Lovely words Johnny.

Written by beatricelouise (215 comments posted) 8th June 2008
Very sorry to hear of your loss, Johnny D. You did very well, especially under such difficult circumstances. Oh, to be loved and missed once we leave this earth. My father has been gone 9 years, and I still miss him very much. Beautiful expression of your love and memory of Mamman. :sigh
Thank you Josie & Louise
Written by JohnnyD (106 comments posted) 10th June 2008
For each small things we used to run towards Mamman. Now that she has gone, it has become so hard because I really have no one, who understands me so well. WHo will guide me when I need her so much... well, life has to go on. I am trying my best but she was so much part of everything that the void can never be filled by anyone. 
 
Well, I am sorry about your father Louise and I can well understand the feeling, which I am going through... try to write about him remembering all your fondest memories about your loving father. May their soul REST IN PEACE FOREVER & EVER... 
 
Take care always...

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