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By Katanga
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09 June 2008 |
Ah, here's an attempt!
Not a good one, but hey?!
Cheers!
John X
Jolly Porridge
For the jolliest Persian porridge
You really don’t have to forage
The best – don’t you know
Come rain wind or snow
Is oats plus a tad of wild borage!
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (746 comments posted) 8th June 2008 | Not bad! I take back what I said about there being no rhymes for porridge! V | Try 'igloo' Written by Katanga (1497 comments posted) 8th June 2008 | Ha! Ha! But I'll let you go first . . . If you want . . . Yo! John | Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 9th June 2008 | Wiping poo from your shoe in an igloo Is a stunningly rude thing that you do. As the snow is so crispy, virgin and white It shows every last smear of polar bear sh*te. Hurrah! Dreadful meter, but does that count? Liked yours, John. Phil
| Hurrah! Written by Katanga (1497 comments posted) 9th June 2008 | Love the idea! But doesn't quite pass muster, Buster! No offence! Cheers! KTJ |
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