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Jolly Porridge!
By Katanga
09 June 2008

Ah, here's an attempt!

Not a good one, but hey?!

Cheers!

John X


 

Jolly Porridge

For the jolliest Persian porridge
You really don’t have to forage
The best – don’t you know
Come rain wind or snow
Is oats plus a tad of wild borage!

Reviews

Written by Veronica_Milvus (746 comments posted) 8th June 2008
Not bad! 
 
I take back what I said about there being no rhymes for porridge! 
 
V
Try 'igloo'
Written by Katanga (1497 comments posted) 8th June 2008
Ha! Ha! But I'll let you go first . . . 
 
If you want . . . 
 
Yo! 
 
John

Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 9th June 2008
Wiping poo from your shoe in an igloo 
Is a stunningly rude thing that you do. 
As the snow is so crispy, virgin and white 
It shows every last smear of polar bear sh*te. 
 
Hurrah! Dreadful meter, but does that count? 
 
Liked yours, John. 
 
Phil 
Hurrah!
Written by Katanga (1497 comments posted) 9th June 2008
Love the idea! 
 
But doesn't quite pass muster, Buster! 
 
No offence! 
 
Cheers! 
 
KTJ

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