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Godber's Revenge
By Katanga
09 June 2008


Hmmmmmm! Just for fun . . .

Oh! Yo! Ho!

John

X



Fletcher's Buddy

There was a young inmate - one Godber,
Who'd not be seen dead in a jodpur
When Barrowclough beckoned
He hid, 'cos he reckoned
That Ronnie would rally - God 'elp 'er!

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Written by Phil (7001 comments posted) 9th June 2008
I have an alternative final line that I'll PM you on request, John. It's far too rude for here. 
 
ENjoyed this one too. 
 
Phil
Good on yer, Phil!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 9th June 2008
I look forward to it! 
 
Ho! 
 
Rude jollity rules okay! 
 
Cheers! 
 
KTJ X

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