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Whinger who not me
By meadowcroft1964
09 June 2008
If I am wrong then criticize



Abuse I've received from the best
Got the T shirt worn the vest
With pride I've with stood every test
Names I been called and the rest
The Devil child and the creature from hell
Are examples of just two
O! A Bastard  yes that one too
So to be called a whinger is really soft stuff
Words no longer hurt me so say want you dare
But please treat others with a little more care
This is the last comment on the subject I make
It up to you which course that you take
To stay or go away is your right to choose
whether It be praise or abuse when reviewing you use  
I've  wasted to much energy on this unhappy event
I leave you in hope that heaven sent
You find a better way your angry to vent
I WISH YOU THE BEST

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 9th June 2008
I don't know what you are commenting on but I think it is very wise to say it ends here and make it the last retort. You shouldn't waste your talent for expression on matters like this 
cheers 
jane
Here! Here!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 10th June 2008
Very well put, Violet, and your sentiments are noble indeed, considering. 
 
I've been closely following all that you refer to - let's hope this puts an end to the matter, as you so generously hope! 
 
Please don't waste any more energy! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

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