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| The Summer Sun | |
| By awakenedmind | ||
| 09 June 2008 | ||
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Thinking about times gone past The sun today warms me through As I lay here thinking of you The grass smells sweet in the heat of day Reminds me of the games we played
With all the mums just looking on The dads they want play But decide to leave it another day
The lotion comes out and covers you The hats go on and sunglasses too As dad comes back with his brew
And ask for one with great delight The money is given and off I go A 99 with a flake you know
And now I lay here right next to thee The deciding to wait for tomorrow Is finally me I wail in sorrow
As we watch the children never tire Will they think the same I Whilst swimming through that rubber tyre.
And reflect on those days in the sun Memories of parents now long gone And how they laid in the summer sun
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