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Stinky Smells!
By Katanga
09 June 2008
Third attempt . . .

To be sung as loudly as possible to the tune of 'Jingle Bells'!

Ho!

Cheers again!

John X


Stinky Smells!

Stinky smells, stinky smells
Stinking all the day
Oh what fun it is to poo!
What will my teacher say? Hey!


[Repeat tunefully, cheerfully, triumphantly, tearfully ad nauseam]

Reviews

Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 9th June 2008
Hmmm To be honest John, this is not as good as some of your others, but you can't have masterpieces every time can you? ha ha The main thing is that you have had a bit of fun doing this. That is what counts.
Josie, I agree!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 9th June 2008
Thank you for being honest, Josie! 
 
I have no problem with binning a few, and I think this is going to head straight for the 'poetry recycling' bag. 
 
Ha! Ha! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

Written by mia_ms_kim (976 comments posted) 10th June 2008
Does this sing to the tune o f Jingle Bell? My boy loved this one, too. I'm now afraid he might perform all these loo poems in his Kindy class! 
 
Mia :eek
'Fraid So!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 10th June 2008
The more that sing it, and the louder, the better! 
 
Oh! Ho! Ho! 
 
Cheers!  
 
John XXX

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