Great Writing - Home > For Kids > Mary Mary - Another Version
READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 931 guests online and 10 members online
For Children
Mary Mary - Another Version
By Josie
09 June 2008
I dread what people think when they come to this section of GW. ha ha.  But perhaps they can see that we are having lots of fun.







Mary Mary, short and hairy,

Up to her chin in dough.

With pots and pans and sticky hands

But her face is all of aglow – oh oh!

But her face is all of aglow!

   

Reviews
Hey
Written by littledom2008 (95 comments posted) 9th June 2008
I'm really liking these altenates 
 
D.C
Burning?
Written by Katanga (1129 comments posted) 9th June 2008
Hmmmm! 
 
Is this a happy one, Josie, or a Health and Safety warning?! 
 
Ho! Ho! 
 
Cheers! Nice one! 
 
John X

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

Next item