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Poetry
The Crow
By Adam_S
10 June 2008
A poem inspired by the hit movie and the poem the raven. All reviews and ratings welcome.

I woke to the rain tapping on my window

And the wind rapping

Rapping at my door.

 

I turned over to try and sleep once more

But the rapping I could not endure.

 

So I got up and found things to do

But the rapping continued through

The day and into the night

So loud it had me gripped in fright.

 

Another day of rapping I could not endure

So I went slowly to the door

And there if found the source of the rapping

A crow.

 

It flew and landed at my feet

In its eyes I saw not defeat but life

Life that dances to a different beat.

 

I sat in the dark with a black chest and white face

And for the next few nights

I wore a smile on my face.

 

So without fear, hurt or a mere test

I got revenge on those I detest

And held the ones I love to my beating heart and breast.

 

I tell them I have to leave

To god’s country

With my soul freed.

 

And yet I wonder if I pounded

On his door on the day he likes to rest

Will he snore or hear me?

Like the rain on my window

And the crow at my door.

Reviews
Like it!
Written by Katanga (1163 comments posted) 9th June 2008
And like it a lot - especially the ending! 
 
Great stuff! 
 
Hope to see more! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

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