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Poetry
Late Night
By Adam_S
10 June 2008
A guy askes a girl to be with him one late night, inpsired by Bob Dyland's Lay lady lay. All reviews and ratings wellcome

Girl come and be with me,

My soul is dirty

But my body is clean

Can I hold you? Or kiss your cheek?

To hear you say “I love you,” would do it for me.

 

Girl won’t you stay?

And we can watch the sun rise high.

In each others arms we can fantasize,

Open up your heart and get a surprise,

Look in the others eyes as time rolls by.

 

Girl I don’t want you to leave,

You’re the most beautiful thing I have ever seen,

I want to tell the world you’re in love with me

So come and lie with me

And make me clean.

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