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A taste for it .
By patterjack
10 June 2008
Pushing vocab. again.  But not, i hope wine buff language.

 A Taste For It

Stick out your tongue -- we won't call you rude
as we want to discuss some things about  food.
Without that organ, in your mouth neatly placed  
You would never possess a good sense of taste !

First then,  let's set your taste buds a-flutter
by letting them meet with cold smooth salty butter;
then once they've returned to be quiet and placid
let's tickle them next with a sour lemon's acid.
Coffee's not really good for the young  
but old coffee's bitter on anyone's tongue.
Now the first four main tastes would be incomplete  
if we didn't present you with something that's sweet
like saccharine , sugar or  beautiful honey
so good to the tongue be it candied or runny.

But think of the other words you could use
about all the varied foods you could choose !
peppery, vinegary, spicy or tart
(there's four really good ones to use for a start)
minty and smoky and zesty are flavour-y
and I'm sure you could find even more that are savour-y!

But let's think about fruit, mellow or luscious
any or all can taste quite delicious.
Not one of them that you take up in your hand  
should ever be thought of as being too bland--

but beware of food that is ancient and stale
that's what might make your appetite fail!   


Reviews
Yum! Yum!
Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 10th June 2008
Excellent poem, patterjack. 
 
Smoothly and playfully constructed after a really attention-grabbing first line. 
 
This would work really well in the classroom, with the teacher bringing in all manner of things for the children to taste, blindfolded (is that allowed in these health-and-safety-conscious days?!). 
 
I've done this my self with adult students learning English. 
Chinese fish sauce was hilarious - nearly induced vomiting! 
 
Great for vocab development and such fun! 
 
Thoroughly enjoyed! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John
thank you
Written by patterjack (1194 comments posted) 10th June 2008
appreciated your review 
 
patterjack

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3362 comments posted) 10th June 2008
It's a great children's poem.It talks to children without talking down to them and introduces lots of new words in a very accessible poem that they will have fun reading. It's a difficult line to tread; to keep the little ones interested while stretching their minds and I think you have achieved that. 
cheers 
jane
Thanks BBS
Written by patterjack (1194 comments posted) 10th June 2008
I do my best to entertain but can't help being a pedagogue as well :grin  
 
patterjack

Written by mia_ms_kim (1019 comments posted) 10th June 2008
What an enjoyable poem! I love the simple but clever rhyme. I'm beginning to wonder if witty, fun poems should be used to advertise food??? 
 
Mia 8)
i am sure
Written by patterjack (1194 comments posted) 10th June 2008
that someone has written an ode to the meat pie ! 
 
( Not to mention the story of The Magic Pudding ! )  
 
thanks mia -- only a couple of senses to go ! 
 
patterjack

Written by Josie (2785 comments posted) 12th June 2008
I like this poem Brian. I had one last poem to write on "the senses" and it was "taste." I wrote it first before seeing yours so that I wasn't influenced. Mine is completely different, and I hope it is good for stimulating talk about taste-buds, but yours is excellent because you bring in so many wonderful adjectives which we use to relate to food. I think my poem also relates to the sense of smell because I love the smell of fish and chips and roast beef cooking. (I've got to lose some weight quickly, so must think of something else.) ha ha I am sure teachers will find these poems good in their classrooms.

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