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Old Mother Hubbard
By 1211kellie
10 June 2008
My third attempt at Josie's challenge




 lady





Old Mother Hubbard, sat in her cupboard

Picking her nose with glee
She couldn’t decide whether to flick it outside

So she wiped it upon her knee





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Reviews
Sorry! But . . .
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 10th June 2008
I enjoyed this, but, to be honest I don't think it was up to your previous standard . . . . 
 
I ( like you, maybe?!) am worn out. 
 
Love and Courage! 
 
Keep 'em coming! 
 
Love, 
 
John X

Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 10th June 2008
I'm so grossed out! I was told that in some Asian culture (forgot where, definitely not Korea!), this is totally acceptable.  
 
Mia :eek

Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 11th June 2008
No, I think we could do better for Mother Hubbard, Kellie. I think we should leave the picking of noses behind now. Children could get fed up with it. But you meant well. ha ha. I'll try to think of something for poor Mother Hubbard.
Thank You All
Written by 1211kellie (177 comments posted) 11th June 2008
Yes fair point Josie - it is rather gross isn't it.

Written by Goddess (124 comments posted) 12th June 2008
Hahahahaha! lol that made me laugh so much. It really was not what I was expecting! 
 
Hehehe 
 
 
Very good! 
 
 
Goddess x

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