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By 1211kellie
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10 June 2008 |
My fourth attempt at Josie's challenge
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Bobby Shaftoe’s gone to sea
All that sailing made him heave
He threw up all over me
That dirty little scoundrel
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Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 10th June 2008 | Another gross one! I find that when a woman becomes a mother, poo and vomit become a mundane part of life, and we become completely shameless about discussing such organic matters.
You guys have turned it into an exquisite form of art!
Mia  | Indeed!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 10th June 2008 | Oh!
Yo! Ho!
Keep 'em coming, Kellie!
This is such fun, eh?
And if you want to get seriously serious, have a look at Josie's previous stuff, and try a longer one with rhyme and meter to match . . .
Quite tricky, but worth a go !
Looking forward to more . . .
Cheers!
John XXX | Hello
Written by littledom2008 (95 comments posted) 11th June 2008 | I enjoyed this. This challenge makes good reading.
D.C |
Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 11th June 2008 | | Yes, well done Kellie. It's great fun isn't it? I'm afraid that the sea has the same effect on me. In fact, when I "emigrated" to Canada in the 1960s, I ended up in the hospital ward for not even the injections had any effect. Decided it's better to stay in the Yorkshire Dales nowadays. |
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