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Mary Mary - Once again
By 1211kellie
11 June 2008
My fifth attempt at recycling nursery rhymes




mower



Mary Mary quite contrary

Watched the gardener mow
Forget the bells and cockle shells

He’d certainly win best in show


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hi
Written by littledom2008 (95 comments posted) 11th June 2008
Not to sound repetitive but this was nice and I enjoyed it. Sorry can’t say anything more constructive than this. 
 
D.C

Written by Josie (2847 comments posted) 11th June 2008
I think that DC has said all that is necessary. It is very good indeed. I can see that you are enjoying doing the rhymes Kellie.
Super!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 11th June 2008
Love it Kellie! 
 
More please! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John

Written by Goddess (124 comments posted) 12th June 2008
I really enjoyed this like the other one I read of yours! I really enjoy these recycled nusery rhymes! They make me smile :) 
 
 
Goddess xx

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