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"In Other Words" (Bart on Weed)
By Mr_E_Writer
13 June 2008


  Can you tell what it is yet?



Fry me a baboon
And let me pray among the bars
Let me ride my motorbike
Through Exeter with Lars
On other worlds gold buys sand
On other worlds starlings kiss me
 

Reviews

Written by DaleGorder (46 comments posted) 13th June 2008
lol...another testimonial to why they call it..."dope" :)
Bart Howard, I presume,
Written by fellpony (1608 comments posted) 13th June 2008
... not Simpson! 
 
I like Cole Porter, myself.

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 14th June 2008
I thought these were the lyrics all along - but then I never have them write. Strangely entertaining. 
 
Phil

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 14th June 2008
:eek Eeek! - RIGHT

Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 14th June 2008
:eek Eeek! - RIGHT

Written by Goddess (124 comments posted) 14th June 2008
Haha! I really enjoyed that and it all seems to fit well (and strangely it is sing-able!) 
 
Very impressed. 
 
 
Goddess x

Written by Mr_E_Writer (187 comments posted) 14th June 2008
Twas just a silly something, but I'm pleased that a few have enjoyed my little sing-a-long. 
 
Cheers, 
Eric.

Written by Lizzy (793 comments posted) 15th June 2008
You've got me singing now, which is NOT a good idea. 
Liked it 
Lizzy

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