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The Visitor
By Robru
14 June 2008


   Our neighbor had a lovely Limousin Bull that had wings. A humourous look at the consequences.






The neighbour's bull jumped o'er the fence;
Our cows were in that field;
He took a week to do his job,
We waited for the yield.


Our cows are in another field;
Today there are lots more;
We've now got forty little calves
We didn't have before.

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Simply Lovely!
Written by Katanga (1217 comments posted) 14th June 2008
Oh! I do like this! 
 
Nothing metaphysically bamboozling about it! 
 
The repetition of 'our' and 'we' implies a happy relationship, which I find strangely comforting . . . 
 
Cheers! 
 
John X

Written by Robru (219 comments posted) 14th June 2008
John it was always comforting to care for the cows. We, the cows and I, did have a happy working relationship. The big girls weighed in at about 600 kilos while I am scratching to make 90. I like to think we respected easch other. I am pleased you liked this one. 
 
Bob

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