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Answered by Rain
By bobc
15 June 2008
Truth-sense falls all around us like rain.

Questioning eyes seek
Raining  truth falls in buckets
Spilled mind swallows none

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Written by DaleGorder (46 comments posted) 15th June 2008
Yeah i think I've had the mind spill problem so long it's completely used to running bone-head dry :)

Written by mia_ms_kim (1057 comments posted) 15th June 2008
Is this a senryu? So much sad, ironic truth in this. 
 
Mia :roll
Thanks
Written by bobc (51 comments posted) 15th June 2008
Thanks DG AND mia ms kim. Sadly, when the mind is spilled, logic is lost. I've been the bone-head alot DG, HEHE! :sigh

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