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Ben Jonson's question
By no1butClo
14 December 2005
literally.

I steal lines form poems/stories and play and make them mine, this is one of them.


Why will man lament the state he should envy?
For heaven seems too far to reach when you're
On the wrong side of the prophets
To mourn the dead is one thing
To wish to follow...
Is fair.

Why should we wait for the waves to grow sweet?
Why must we forever live in fatal anticipation
And then not be sure of what we waited for?
'Tis a mystery to me. Yet, still, why not celebrate
what we have been "lent" and
Dwell not on futures out of reach,
For these days, are our days
And we must live.

Reviews
very profound
Written by kevinrobson73 (371 comments posted) 15th December 2005
i didn't know the original line 
but you put together an inspring sonnet
Ben Jonson's Question
Written by paulgpaul (37 comments posted) 23rd January 2006
I don't agree about Kevin Robson's perception that you've created a sonnet: for me you've provided a plausible, philosophical premise for others to speculate on! Oh, and I like it.

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