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Gone Fishing
By Mr_E_Writer
16 June 2008

  First a tadpole,
  Then a wobble,
  Then a topple.
  He takes careful aim but misses!
  Whilst going alfresco on a juicy fat bluebottle,
  Little frog
  Fell off
  The log.
  "SPLASH" 
  And now he's learning to swim with the fishes!

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Written by Josie (2718 comments posted) 17th June 2008
Oh - how lovely. I love your first three lines: First a tadpole, Then a wobble, Then a topple. Children would love that. Now look at my "Goodnight" - not quite so witty but - - -
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Written by littledom2008 (95 comments posted) 18th June 2008
:grin I liked this it was funny. Well done. 
 
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