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By Mr_E_Writer
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16 June 2008 |
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First a tadpole,
Then a wobble,
Then a topple.
He takes careful aim but misses!
Whilst going alfresco on a juicy fat bluebottle,
Little frog
Fell off
The log.
"SPLASH"
And now he's learning to swim with the fishes!
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Written by Josie (2718 comments posted) 17th June 2008 | | Oh - how lovely. I love your first three lines: First a tadpole, Then a wobble, Then a topple. Children would love that. Now look at my "Goodnight" - not quite so witty but - - - | Hello Written by littledom2008 (95 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | I liked this it was funny. Well done. D.C |
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