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By whitefur999
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17 June 2008 |
I have real problems with titles and so I do apologise for the lazy untitledness of this poem. I remember your going,
But you're not on my mind.
You and I were just
Jammed in time.
But stepping from somewhere,
You crossed that line.
I feel tears trickling
Down my spine. |
Brutalsoft!
Written by Katanga (1537 comments posted) 17th June 2008 | Hello!
I really like this - there's an almost aggressive brutality in the first stanza which you offset with a regretful gentleness in the second.
More please!
Cheers!
John X |
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