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Written by fellpony
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18 June 2008 |
I would say this is tongue in cheek, but under those circumstances I'd probably bite it off. And before anybody asks, I don't have any skin decorations.
In the tattoo joint
art bites under your bared skin
as you get the point
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Not even
Written by patterjack (1193 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | one specially placed for the Hell's Angles ?
patterjack |
Written by fellpony (1608 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | No, because my 'oss doesn't like motorbikes  |
Written by lovelysarah1984 (81 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | | very good, very clever. Haiku's can tell a story in just a few short words. I have lots of them all over notebooks - I use them as musings when I have a block! | true, but
Written by fellpony (1608 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | strictly this is a senryu, which is not restricted to nature topics like the haiku but can speak of human conditions and actions. They do have the same structure, though rhyme is unusual for either form. I use them as sketchpads - capturing odd little flashes of what I like to think might be genius, but am told is just scribbling!
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (626 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | liked the middle line! Art bites!
(and sometimes, poetry sucks?) |
Written by Phil (6713 comments posted) 18th June 2008 | I hope I was supposed to snigger - I did.
As I've said before. Not a huge fan of the shortened form(s) - but this worked well for me.
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