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Spots!
By lovelysarah1984
18 June 2008
Thanks Josie and others for being the inspiration behind this with all your talk of apperances.  I can't believe I am writing about spots - what have you lot done to me?!  hehehehe.

Sometimes zits, sometimes spots,
What a lot of spots I've got!
Do I pick or should I squeeze?
Black, red, yellow if you please!
Magic spots that ooze and ooze,
Blackheads are the ones I'd choose!
Pop on the mirror in the car,
My best place to poke by far!
Some will splurt some will splatter,
Make a mess, it doesn't matter!
Goo and puss and icky stuff,
Not squeezing spots is very tough!

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Written by Veronica_Milvus (595 comments posted) 18th June 2008
oh yeuch! Thanks for those lovely images! 
 
"splurt"... eeewwwww

Written by mia_ms_kim (976 comments posted) 18th June 2008
I find this far grosser than the manure poems or the nose-picking poems or the baldy or hairy poems published on GW so far. This is the winner, but I lost all my appetite! 
 
Mia :eek

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 19th June 2008
Like it. Goo and puss - class! :grin  
 
Phil

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