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Hmmm
By ArchAngel
19 June 2008
I was bored at my office and I was thinking..this was it..hmm

You know I thought about this shit place world called Life, and I can't even think on a way to start. I have always pondered why people ask what they ask.. People so what they so and some don't even know it's wrong. Others couldn't care. Human life in general has it's characters of word and characters of action. Ponderng on this I wonder about a quote I've seen and it seems so true. We really are trapped in this box called Life, and many of us wonder about why people make the decisions they do. We wonder why are exsitence is so important.. What will happen if we decide to take out life before our time is due? What will go through the minds of our so called 'loved ones'. Ot, there is the few that have lived in this pocket of life, the ones that hide in the shadows of quilt or fright. They are the ones that dissappear on us. Though thinking about that, you wonder about the people that made a huge impact then the next thing you know they are gone and never to be found.

So, these characters of our world change with their experience, but how our thought process is affected by events that seem to either fade or take a large toll. So now we've come to our mental illness. What kind of brain function goes wrong. We all, or most of us, have known the ways a indvidual becomes like that. Usually there is a chemical embalance. But what about those who are have had major events? Whether it be rape, abusive of any kind throughout their life, or even drugs and liquor to mess with thier brain wave patterns. It's events that process thrgouh the mind and it's the person who makes their judgment.

So...what type of character are you? Am I? It's really hard to decide. But..it's funny really how this went from life to the human mind. Now I ponder how that works. But then again the human mind changes every passing day. It's the most dangerous and the most vaunerable of our world, and it's actions taken by the thought process that makes our world such a living hell for some, and a paradise to others.

In all case..this is my outline. Reviews, comment, concerns, anything is welcome to this. After all we all have different views of this world. I'm just sharing mine. I have an opened mind, and welcome anything though I do steer clear of some....


Reviews
FOOD FOR THOUGHT?
Written by JOROTH (2 comments posted) 7th July 2008
FOOD FOR THOUGHT SURE ENOUGH.WAS REMINDED OF A THEORY THAT THIS EXITENCE IS A DREAM, AND WE ENTER REALITY WHEN WE PASS ON.OUR SOUL GETS TO GO HOME. IF A PERSON SHOWS NO OUTWARD SIGN OF ANTSOCIAL OR ABBERANT BEHAVIOR WHO IS TO SAY WHAT QUANITIFIES MENTAL ILLNESS, ESPECIALLY IF ALL THIS WORLD REALLY IS A DREAM?? INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING. IS IMAGINATION A SIGN OF MENTAL ILLNESS OR HIGHER INTELLIGENCE?
FOOD FOR THOUGHT?
Written by JOROTH (2 comments posted) 7th July 2008
FOOD FOR THOUGHT SURE ENOUGH.WAS REMINDED OF A THEORY THAT THIS EXITENCE IS A DREAM, AND WE ENTER REALITY WHEN WE PASS ON.OUR SOUL GETS TO GO HOME. IF A PERSON SHOWS NO OUTWARD SIGN OF ANTSOCIAL OR ABBERANT BEHAVIOR WHO IS TO SAY WHAT QUANITIFIES MENTAL ILLNESS, ESPECIALLY IF ALL THIS WORLD REALLY IS A DREAM?? INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING. IS IMAGINATION A SIGN OF MENTAL ILLNESS OR HIGHER INTELLIGENCE?

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