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| -Kisses You- | |
| By ArchAngel | ||
| 20 June 2008 | ||
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This is my attempt at a love poem I guess 
It's strange how it works, When just simply talking. I begin to start my affection. But the one thing that caught me, Was in fact your reply. -kisses you- I can't explain that feel When I saw those two words appear My body went hot My cheeks burned yet no sweat left my brow My chest pounded, I went out of breath It seemed that a bat had hit me. My stomach churned, But in a good way. I couldn't find my breath And people began to stare This public place saw my reaction While you probably wondered if I was still there So I carefully type -kisses you back- It's slow The keys making their clicks down As the computer ink spreads My heart still pounds, My breath catches up A smile crosses my lips. This panic wasn't fear And it certainly wasn't shock I want to think of it something more But my mind isn't ready to. So, keep that reply And maybe it will work
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