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| The Eternal Dance | |
| By HardLines | ||||
| 20 June 2008 | ||||
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The Eternal Dance Come; take my hand and join the eternal dance with me. Let us dance together upon the mountain-top; Slow stepping, whirling towards the dawn. Let hearts and spirits merge to summon the wild and ancient magic. Let us bring forth thunder for the earth-bound and lightning for the shadowed land. Let us sail across the night sky on the burning embers of this dance, Our trail eclipsing stars in their fire. Let us bring down lightning for the wary, the unbelievers, Those who shun their immortal soul. Let us bring light to the dark places, and blaze a path through pain. Let us steal sweet time, long moments, in each other's arms, Locked far from the world and its wearisome tears. To explore in gentle, loving splendour, the sensuous paths to glory. Come; Dance with me. I await.
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I'd try and review but I'd need to see the form you meant your poetry to be in first. It seems you've stuck it in the first personal-about box and it's run together, looks more like a paragraph. No worries, I did the same thing on my first post but caught it before the 'submit' button was pushed.
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