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By HardLines
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20 June 2008 |
The spring valley rests.
Sweet solitude and birdsong
Amplify silence
Fresh green shoots stretch up
Each guarding a jewelled bead
Reaching for the sun.
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Nice pieces
Written by fellpony (1580 comments posted) 20th June 2008 | | that do what haiku are supposed to do - catch a moment in nature. You've practised this! Well done. | Ah, nice!
Written by Brett (731 comments posted) 21st June 2008 | Both very good examples, I love the first. Good stuff.
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Written by mia_ms_kim (976 comments posted) 21st June 2008 | Beautiful. This piece seems to capture a world apart from ours, without the man-made noise or pollution. Lovely imageries. I find haikus therapeutic and sometimes cathartic.
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