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English Slacker chapter twenty-four |
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By chrismorton
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21 June 2008 |
This is the first chapter from section IV The next time I was in Price-Savers, which was a Saturday, I was putting out strawberries by the front entrance when this girl walked up to me and asked, “Are you Chambers?” And when I replied, “Yeah,” she said, “I’ve got a message for you…”
She was well pretty actually. Not like stunning or anything but somehow that made her more attractive. Normal but still fit if you know what I mean. She had long red hair (like, dyed red), was just a bit shorter than me and was wearing a white tank top, jeans, and sandals – and I remember too that she smelt of chewing gum; mint flavour.
I looked at her, at her eyes, and didn’t feel like nervous for some reason (not that I usually would feel that way about a girl but she was pretty fit). I said, “So what’s the message?” and she looked down sort of shyly and was like, “Well, it’s not really a message; just that your friend’s outside.” And then she said, like shyly again but this time pretty quickly, “Umm, some guy with long hair. And he said to tell you he was outside.”
As she spoke her hair sort of jumped about and around her face, which was quite cute. And I also remember noticing straight away that she had a nice voice too. Kinda sweet but not too girly if you know what I mean and I’ve always liked that in a girl; a nice voice I mean.
I said, “Cool,” and then, “Cheers,” and then… well, she just sort of walked off after that without saying anything else, but displaying, yeah, a pretty sweet arse: Tight but not too small; just right. |
ROFL.
Written by fellpony (1702 comments posted) 21st June 2008 | | I still don't like him but I love reading your descriptions of his day. Bit short, isn't it, for a chapter? |
Written by bluecity (432 comments posted) 17th July 2008 | Good descriptions of the girl, Chris, and his reactions to her. Particularly liked the chewing gum smell! And now you are just getting in enough of his teenage lust, without it being in-your-face.
Did Price Savers have a hyphen in the last chapter? I don't thinks so!
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