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| The Gypsy chase | |
| By meadowcroft1964 | ||||||
| 22 June 2008 | ||||||
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Hi this is a rework of the race would really like honest opinions not some much to the content but from a proper poetry view as It may be going to be used in schools Bell goes On toes Get ready get set She goes Fear flows Push Push Must rush To slow too late They wait Outside gate Stop Fear urges run Hesitate Adrenalin surges Fight flight Which choose What's to lose Teeth hair skin bone Home run Spectres haunt Jeers taunt Run gypsy Dirty gypsy Run Finish nears Sanctuary appears Safely home Race done Won This time
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