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Poetry
The Storm.
By jw2089
23 June 2008
Another one of my attempts at writing a different style of poetry. This is supposed to be a Palindrome. The idea is to write a poem that makes sense when read backwards from the middle (or at the word 'restless'), I'm really bad at explaining things....
Don't think this worked aswell as the other one though.. any suggestions?
(Please note.. I'm not obsessed with the weather hehe.)



Tempest,
vast and electric-
means thunder echoing;
with sleepless nights
RESTLESS
nights sleepless with
echoing thunder means
electric and vast
Tempest.

Reviews

Written by PinothyJ (12 comments posted) 23rd June 2008
Ohhhh, first time I've seen one of these! I'm really drawn to this one. 
 
 
Good job…

Written by Phil (7169 comments posted) 23rd June 2008
Interesting concept. The meaning does work as you intended. 
 
Phil

Written by Brett (1113 comments posted) 23rd June 2008
Interesting and well constructed!  
You seem to be a kindred spirit - try a sestina or pantoum! 
 
Cheers

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