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Keep Your Fork
By briarcroft
23 June 2008

This poem is based on the often forwarded essay "Keep Your Fork" written by Roger William Thomas in "A Third Serving of Chicken Soup for the Soul":

"There was a woman who had been diagnosed with a terminal Illness and had been given three months to live. So as she was getting her things "in  order", she contacted her pastor and had him come to her house to discuss certain aspects of her final wishes. She told him which songs she wanted sung at the service, what scriptures she would like read, and what  outfit she wanted to be buried in. The woman also requested to be buried with her favorite Bible. Everything was in order and the pastor was preparing to leave when the woman suddenly remembered something very important to her. "There's one more thing," she said excitedly. "What's that?" came the pastor's reply. "This is very important," the woman continued. " I want to be buried with a fork in my right hand." 

The pastor stood looking at the woman, not knowing quite what to say. "That surprises you, doesn't it?" the woman asked. "Well, to be honest, I'm puzzled by the request," said the pastor. The woman explained. "In all my years of attending church socials and potluck dinners, I always remember that when the dishes of the main course were being cleared, someone would inevitably lean over and say, 'Keep your fork'. It was my favorite part because I knew that something better was coming...like velvety chocolate cake or deep-dish apple pie. Something wonderful, and with substance! So, I just want people to see me there in that casket with a fork in my hand and I want them to wonder 'What's with the fork?'. Then I want you to tell them: "Keep your fork....the best is yet to come". The pastor's eyes welled up with tears of joy as he hugged the woman goodbye. He knew this would be one of the last times he would see her before her death. But he also knew that the woman had a better grasp of heaven than he did. She KNEW that something better was coming.

At the funeral people were walking by the woman's casket and they saw  the pretty dress she was wearing and her favorite Bible and the fork  placed in her right hand. Over and over, the pastor heard the question  "What's with the fork?" And over and over he smiled. During his message,  the pastor told the people of the conversation he had with the woman  shortly before she died. He also told them about the fork and about  what it symbolized to her. The pastor told the people how he could not stop  thinking about the fork and told them that they probably would not be able to stop thinking about it either. He was right. So the next time you reach down for your fork, let it remind you oh so gently, that the best is yet to come."

 


How many potlucks
And meals recalled;
Plates filled and emptied
Midst talk great and small.

Though feeling full
To the last crumb,
Save your fork
For dessert to come.

When life's feast is done
And death is near~
Instead of worry
And unknown fear

Hold fast your fork
So all will see~
More follows this
The best yet to be.


Reviews
My Goodness!
Written by Katanga (1410 comments posted) 23rd June 2008
That's a long introduction to a short poem . . . 
 
But well worth it for me! 
 
I really like everything you've posted so far and simply look forward to more . . . 
 
Brilliant! 
 
Yo! 
 
John X 
 

Written by KaydieKate (75 comments posted) 23rd June 2008
I really love it! It's rhythmic and well done. The only stanza I would say needed work is the first, where the third line seems to halt it a bit. But that's minor. :grin

Written by mia_ms_kim (1054 comments posted) 23rd June 2008
Enjoyed both the intro and the poem. I liked the last stanza especially. I suppose how one receives this piece will depend on his belief about afterlife or lack of it, and his place in it.  
 
I found this fun, humourous and enjoyable. I love eating, so likening heaven to food to die for, totally works for me! My ambition in the afterlife is to run a restaurant - I totally believe we must eat there, too. I'll hold fast to my spoon and chopsticks as well! 
 
Mia 8)

Written by Josie (2825 comments posted) 16th July 2008
Hello - Yes, I agree with the woman, and I am sure I would like also to be buried with a fork - but I am certain that there is a wonderful world beyond this. Nothing in nature really dies and nature resurrects itself so beautifully, so why should it be different for human beings? Loved your poem.

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