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| Out of tune, out of time | |
| By PinothyJ | ||
| 25 June 2008 | ||
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I write most of my poetry as lyrics for music, so that generally why you have the various verse chorus like structures. I hope you enjoy… it's odd and it's strange to try and keep sane but they try, ever so hard it's cold and its grey to make this my day but at that moment it all falls apart it's strange I know this cane makes me feel old but the piano keeps playing and playing and playing... look like it's time to close for a while but I'm feeling so terribly ill would it seem alright that if I stayed a while the air is so silent and still my drink and you there piano fixed stare there's a tune that you still haven't played it's held in a key that's known only to me convince me that I'm not afraid it's strange I know that you don't want me to go but the piano keeps playing and playing and playing... ~~~ you've forgotten the moment, you've forgotten your stare you've forgotten the mood and you've forgotten I'm there you've forgotten my drink and the silent still air but the piano keeps playing and playing and playing... you've forgotten to close forgotten the time you've forgotten the words and the rhythm and rhyme you've forgotten it's strange and you've forgotten the night but the piano keeps playing and playing and playing... but the piano keeps playing and playing and playing... but the piano keeps playing and playing and playing... ~~~ it's strange I know this cane make me feel old and I know it seems strange to try and keep sane but they try if ever so hard it's cold and it's grey to make this my day but for that moment it all falls apart...
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