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Western Philosophy #2

By Mr_E_Writer

27 June 2008

     Your bicycle had a puncture
     I stopped to offer assistance
     Now we share a flat

                 *

     I owned an allotment
     You liked to get your hands dirty
     My smallholding swelled

                 *

     I was an out of work actor
     You loved herbaceous borders
     We grew a part...

                           ...damn that cad Herbie Borders!

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Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 27th June 2008

Another smile. Effective pun.

Phil

Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 28th June 2008

I don't understand. Are you saying that there was sufficient living accomadation inside the inner tube of the tyre, or are the two scenarios indirectly linked?

Written by Turquoise-Tangerine (95 comments posted) 28th June 2008

It was a very large tyre. Think 'monster trucks'.

Written by Mr_E_Writer (187 comments posted) 28th June 2008

No, Marc, it's not a bloody tractor tyre - it's a play on words.
"Dipstick".

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