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Village school wins coverted Blue Flag award.
By woody44
29 June 2008
Another `Newsbiscuit` piece.

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Written by Phil (7169 comments posted) 29th June 2008
Good one, especially the caretaker. You'd be amazed how things like that stick. 
 
We have a sand pit outside the nursery classroom. It's protected by a padlocked wooden frame that is replaced every night. When the local yobs got so frustrated they couldn't open it (to contaminate with broken glass, I assume) they took to urinating through the gaps. 
 
Phil
Inspired!
Written by Brett (1113 comments posted) 29th June 2008
This could have come right out of any local rag - loved the spade fight! 
Cheers

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3713 comments posted) 2nd July 2008
I loved the way you played it straight but added the little asides that pointed to far weirder goings on.Its that clever contrast really adds a sparkle to the humour. 
A brilliantly targeted piece. 
Jane 
P.S how are you getting on with your play submissions. I'll PM later

Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 6th July 2008
Thanks Phil, Brett and Jane. 
 
Roger
HI Woody
Written by jean.day (2453 comments posted) 7th July 2008
This was great fun to read. I must ask my granddaughter how they protect the sand pit at her school. And to watch out for caretakers offering after school lessons.

Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 8th July 2008
Thanks Jean. I find myself doing these little pieces when I`m struggling with a longer bit of writing. Have you another novel in the pipeline yet, or are you still recovering from the effort of the last one? 
 
happy writing 
Roger

Written by 1211kellie (177 comments posted) 20th July 2008
Excellent piece. Thought this was skillfully done and so funny. 
 
 
Kellie

Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 21st July 2008
Thanks kellie. I don`t think our paths have crossed on hear so Hi! 
 
happy writing 
Roger

Written by coosh (973 comments posted) 9th August 2008
There's always a Miss/Mrs Armitage at these places - we had two. Delightful piece, Woody - as ever, beautifully understated, seemingly gentle and laid back, and then we walk innocently into bogies and Mr. Booth. Great fun and very well put together. Are you originally from Chilington?

Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 10th August 2008
Hi David. My GGGG grandfather settled in Chilington in 1632 and founded the first shoe factory in the area, producing football boots and what is to believed to be the first ever spiked golfing shoes. For some reason the factory never prospered and he was forced to get a job in a fast food outlet in Northhampton. 
 
Thanks and it`s good to have you back 
Roger

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