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The Difference To Me
By Katanga
01 July 2008

A frivial trivolity!

Cheers!

John X


And oh, the difference to me!


A cold grape upon my nipple
is ecstasy indeed,
compared with a warmed-up packeted one!
There really is no need

to compare or contrast the two,
they’re really very different.
The difference depends, you see,
on the degree of their infridgement.

The coldness of our grape, you’ll find,
depends on the cooling effect
of your refrigerating smile
that I can always detect

in the frigid way you look at me,
when I suggest going to bed.
Why do we even bother?
Let’s eat hot grapes instead!

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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 1st July 2008
Doesn't it depend on who's placing the grape? 
 
:grin  
 
Phil
Indeed it does . . .
Written by Katanga (1229 comments posted) 1st July 2008
. . . Phil, but that's another fruity poem! 
 
Cheers! 
 
KYJ

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