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AMI – THE BEAUTIFUL ANGEL!
By JohnnyD
04 July 2008
 

Your sparkling eyes

Tell a tale of a loving soul

Oh so lovingly!

 

Your beautiful infectious smile

Makes the day

Oh so beautiful!

 

Your unusual voice

Makes me listen to you

Oh so endlessly!

 

Your loving, caring nature

Well, how may I describe

Oh my God!

 

Your loving company

It is just out-of-this-world

Oh Ami – the beautiful angel!

 

Loving you

Is a dream-come-true

Oh beautiful angel!

 

I love you, I love you

Yes, I will love you forever

Ami – my beautiful angel!

 
Johnny D
28th June 2008

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Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 4th July 2008
Ha ha - Caught hook, line and sinker (as we say in English). Ami is a good fisherwoman I would say!!!! I hope she doesn't throw you back into the sea Johnny. I wonder the men on this website are not giving out their advice to you. ha ha Many of them have been "caught" too.

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