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| Sometimes (For Adonis) | |
| By SplatterpunkShelbs | ||||||||||
| 05 July 2008 | ||||||||||
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This is the first and (I think) the best of my Adonis poems. Tell me what you think. ~Shelby Sometimes I wonder when you flip your hair, out of your face and it hangs in the air, for only a second; do you toss it like that, When you're alone? Or when you pray? Or when you're making love? Sometimes I lose it when I see you smile, At something I do and we laugh for awhile' Until we forget it; Do you smile like that, At anyone else? Or at yourself? Or when you're dreaming? Sometimes I stare at you and you don't see, The fly on the wall (also known as me), Who's watching you; Do you sigh like that, When you're sad? Or because you're tired? Or because you think no one's watching? Sometimes I love you but mostly I adore, How your every feature touches me to the core, and makes me weak, Because you're beautiful? Or because I'm Ugly? Or just because?
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