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By Katanga
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05 July 2008 |
Well, I thought 'Poetry and Science' needed to be lightened up . . .
Ha! Ha! The trouble is, it's true!
Cheers!
John X
Poetry and Porn
Poetry is pornography,
your lines are naked flesh
yielding scents and secrets
forbidden fruits of sheer excess.
I wrap your words around me,
they are the inside thighs
of mermaids and of angels.
Your metre gently sighs
with a simple pure lost longing,
forgotten long ago,
for erotic carnal knowledge
of you, and I should know,
silky, pulsating, vibrant,
your poem simply begs
for me once more, again
I drink the bottle to the dregs.
I love each oozing stanza
I crush each line, a grape.
Poetry is addictive -
for me, there’s no escape.
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Written by Veronica_Milvus (637 comments posted) 6th July 2008 | There are some lovely lines here, Tolstoy: "Your metre gently sighs / with a simple pure lost longing" and "your lines are naked flesh". But a couple of questions? Is it porn, or is it passion? one of those sounds pejorative. And, do mermaids have inner thighs?
| Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 6th July 2008 | Really enjoyed most of it. Although... 'I love each oozing stanza I crush each line, a grape.' reminded me of that hideous catchphrase, 'oooh, I could crush a grape'. I've thankfully forgotten who was responsible for that one. Vron's literal mind: 'do mermaids have inner thighs?', does make me wonder...inspiration for a further poem perhaps? 'Do angels wear underwing deodorant?', 'Do mermaids smell exquisitely of fish?', 'Does the medusa need hair extensions?', 'Is Goldilocks starting to grey?' and so on... | Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 6th July 2008 | Unfortunately, I remember. I could crush a grape - Stu Francis - top class pillock. Do mermaids have inner thighs? Well - that depends on who is imagining them, I would have thought. Puts your 'addiction' across really well. 'My name is John (although I sometimes go by Katie, Tolstoy, or plain Jellyman) and I am a poemolic.' Phil |
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