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| Another problem | |
| By punchy | ||||||||
| 10 July 2008 | ||||||||
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Just a bit of sillyness! I have a big dilemma
well the problem's big to me
This problem that I face right now
Just landed on my knee
I'm sitting in a garden
A garden filled with friends
I don't want them to see my fear
But how do I pretend
I'm terrified of insects
and this one has got hair
A stripey back, 3 large eyes
That quiver as they stare
I know it wants to hurt me
And it knows that I know
So should I let it kill me now
or put my fear on show
My friends will think I'm freaky
If I scream and flap about
I know I'll never live it down
I feel it coming out
My tummy it is tightening
I'm breathing triple speed
My head has gone all big and hot
This insect wants to feed
OH My God 'it's flown away
I'd better check around
It might be hovering above
Or lurking on the ground
I think I'm safe, it must have gone
And I am still alive
That's the closest I have come to death
How did I survive?
I lived a whole adventure
My friends are unaware
The only proof I have to show
A puddle on my chair
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