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By awakenedmind
10 July 2008
The sun has risen the night now gone
Still my demons go on and on
I try to understand the way I feel
Maybe then I’ll start to heal

The words go round within my head
And make me wish that I were dead
Negativity is always there
A burden that I never share

The positives of life must come through
And shield me from this feeling blue
But the barriers now are built too strong
So the positive side I don’t belong

I’m at wits end and full of fear
But tomorrow I know I may be clear
But then again it will return
And I will have no where to turn

I’m all mixed up I can’t think clear
I know I want release from here
As tears well up within my eyes
I turn away myself despise
  

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KNOW THE FEELING
Written by meadowcroft1964 (102 comments posted) 10th July 2008
COULD NOT HAVE DISCRIBTED DEPRESION BETTER
Been There
Written by Robru (219 comments posted) 10th July 2008
 
Fortunately I had friendly support and a heavy workload. The necessity of work and the support got me through.

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