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| By TwistedTales | ||||||
| 11 July 2008 | ||||||
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This is my second poem in this section. I've only ever written three. I don't know a thing about poems. I am posting it here for you to tell me if it's any good, or even qualifies as a poem. Some days, I’ve no one to talk to, Not even myself, So, I sit and write, Or just cry, with self,
Alone, at
night I stare out the window, At the sky, the birds, the trees, My world runs in motion slow, Like the last one left on a chess-board, a lone piece
I read, I laugh, I learn sometimes, I pray, I like the gray sometimes,
But a
red, a green, a yellow would be nice sometimes The sun shines like a light bright, Bathes everyone with its glow, Like a writer at work in the night,
Letting
his blood spill onto the page below Time runs in front of my eyes, Before you know it passes you by, With no greetings, no goodbyes, It’ no one’s friend, no one’s ally Day comes and goes like everyday, It’s got God’s orders to obey, When today comes, you miss yesterday, When it was yesterday, you wanted today
If I want to get lost, I take them off, The world’s much clearer, and not, I do so to find myself, not to loaf. Some days, I’ve no one to talk to, Not even myself, So, I sit and write, Or just cry, with self, Alone, at night.
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