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| The Journey | |
| By woody44 | ||||||||||||||
| 11 July 2008 | ||||||||||||||
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Another `flash fiction` piece done for a competition THE JOURNEY I came across him as I pursued my solitary travels. Round of body and ruddy of face, he was seated by the village duck pond, a jug of ale in one hand, a smouldering pipe in the other. `Tis fair set for Micklemass`, he greeted me, taking a long, considered draw on his old pipe. `Indeed it is sir,` I replied, slumping down gratefully beside him. `You be come far travelling?,` he asked. For a moment I stared at the placid water. `Many a good mile these past weeks,` I replied. He turned to face me, his rheumy eyes taking in my road-weary appearance. `You be wanting a gill then,` he said, thrusting the earthenware jug towards me. `Why thankyou for your kindness,` I replied, gulping a mouthful of the cool, frothy liquid. `I like the quiet see,` he said, taking another draw on his pipe. `Gets a jug from the Anchor and comes down here most afternoons.` He lapsed into silence as I took another draft of the sweet-tasting ale. `Lovely spot to be alone with your thoughts,` I replied after a while, handing him back the jug. He took a long swig. `Strange things, thoughts,` he said, knocking out his pipe against the side of the old seat. `Some folk sits an` lets `em wash over theirselves `til they becomes clear as well water. Others..well others does their best to keep them thoughts two steps behind `em.` We sat in silence again, he rekindling his old pipe, me gazing at the dragon flies as they hovered over the shimmering pond. `Nice place is it..your village?` I eventually asked. `Good as most I expect,` he replied.
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