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The Bridesmaid
By jean.day
25 December 2005

This is not my work, but I hope to use it in some future work. I copied it from an Album found amongst my father-in-law's books - hand written and some of the poems are dated 1834. None of it is signed but each item has initials after it.  I am not sure if it is an original work, or somebody has copied out a famous poem. Do any of you poets know?  I found on the internet a poem called The Bridesmaid by HF Gould, in 1834, but it is not the right one.


The Bridesmaid


The bridal is o'er the guests are all gone.
The bride's only sister sits weeping alone,
The wreath of white roses is torn from her brow
And the heart of the bridesmaid is desolate now.


With smiles and caresses she decked the fair bride
And then led her forth with affection and pride
She knew that together no more should they dwell
Yet she smiled when she kissed her and bade her farewell


She would not  embitter a festival day
Nor send a sweet sister in sadness away
The bells are all ringing she sees her depart
She cannot veil longer the grief of her heart


She thinks of each pleasure, each pain that endures
The lovely compassion of happier years
She has torn the white roses in grief from her brow
And the heart of the bridesmaid is desolate now.

F - la - A

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Pretty good
Written by Dark_Red (10 comments posted) 16th January 2006
An interesting story about the source of this poem, like the beginning of one of those interesting little short stories that we never have to write evaluations of in English exams. 
 
The poem itself is brilliant. Very thought-provoking and delicate, the simple rhyming structure and techniques would point to it being written by someone with a lot of emotion regarding the contents of the poem (in fact I'm not sure how I drew that conclusion).  
 
It's certainly one of the best poems I've read in a while.

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