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| Probing for Sweet Peas | |
| By briarcroft | ||||||
| 12 July 2008 | ||||||
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This was written on a theme of "Memory" as an exercise Wafting morning scent Of waffles with maple syrup
Combines with a dirty diaper left too long in the pail
Stunningly bright pastels spread on an easel
As he gently encourages the reach beneath the downy underside
To the yearning tug of a hungry mouth on the breast
Rolling on the tongue reciting
Just down the hall of clanging lockers
Through the treetops while whoosh of owl wings
Aware of bright lights and whirring machines
What do you see now, what can you hear, what odor
With each probe of temporal lobe, of fornix
Of neurons and synaptic holding bins of chemical transmitters
To find the offending spot to be removed, to erase the electrical
And be free again to live, to love, to swoon at the perfume
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