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Suffocating me
By ReflectingGod
13 July 2008
My friend is very upset over a breakup
and I found someone and she's upset because it isn't our friend
and she doesn't want to see me get affection.
Basically, all the friends I hang out with are all single now
and usually most of them are taken I am the one single.
but now I think I have found someone
and no one is very happy...
Karma sucks.

I wanna run and laugh in the rain
I want to feel it's cold spikes shiver through my spine
I wish for all the depression and loneness to go

I am suffocating with mix emotions
I am choking on my own words
I can't breathe enough to live

I know it hurts
I knew what you would do
I just wish you've known what I felt

I can't be sorry enough for you
I don't  know what I did was wrong
I couldn't be happy anymore?

I know how much it hurts
I understand your pain
I wish you could smile long enough

I want you to forget it
I can't force you to erase his memory
I believe I can't do anything right now

I'll try not to hold hands
I will not fall in love
I am going to stay alone then

I Will Make You Happy Again
I am going to make sure of it
I will never let you down

You need to smile
You got to laugh more
You have to try to forget him

You must not hate me
You know what I haven't done
You will began to understand

You know I can't be alone for long
You must know the same for you
You laugh and I'll laugh with you

You've forgive me if I don't?
You can't let this get you down
You need to get out more

You have to look me in the eyes
You must say what I already realized
You  and me can't do much of anything

We are stupid girls.









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