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To River From The One
By Adam_S
16 July 2008

Bit of an odd poem I wrote as the "lover" of the character River from the firefly tv series, its a bit out there at times.

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Seven lamps of fire
Burning with rage and desire.
Desire to be with the one I love
And rage because it's never safe for us.

Maybe one day we'll fly away
Find a place that’s safe to stay
Until they forget that you’re
theirs.

You can be whole in my arms
like you are
in my head.

It'll be all right little one
someday you will see
that our love will be like the birds
completely free.

In the mean time however
I'm sure that you'll agree
It’s time to stop talking
And let you lie with me.

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