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| The Spice of Life | |
| By twriter | ||||||
| 27 December 2005 | ||||||
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This sagging little piece could do with a little help, so critism please... The Spice of Life
Workman takes his overalls. Changes and then sets about his task of hard labour: Working with iron. Same day; same routine.
Workman removes his overalls. Changes and then returns home to his room where the screen sits lonely as the same day closes.
Workman hears the phone ring.
Changes!
He hears the voice on the other end Tells him that a drink is needed.
So as the seasoning falls Life is spiced; Boredom is no more.
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