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Poetry
My Arse
By Katanga
19 July 2008

Just a bit of fun for the weekend!

The 'revered Joanna' called me 'Poet of the Rear', no small compliment for me, I can assure you! (Kellie, if you're out there - another one for you about my nether regions!).

I have chosen limerick, rather than sonnet, form for reasons that I hope are self-evident?

Ha! Ha! Ha!

John X



My Arse

Pray, please bend over, my Dear,
There's something no one must hear -
The state of my arse
Is an absolute farce -
May I whisper why in your rear?

Reviews

Written by NathanRoberts (277 comments posted) 20th July 2008
What's wrong with a sonnet about your arse? Too cheeky?  
 
This brightened my morning John.  
 
It's maybe a bit anal to critique it, but the last line through me a bit. Re-reading it, I realise you are addressing the rear end of your dearest and the topic of conversation is your rear, which is quite a complex relationship for a limerick.
Complex?
Written by Katanga (1179 comments posted) 20th July 2008
Indeed, through and threw! 
 
Cheers! 
 
John

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