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| Worrywart | |
| By amsford | ||||||||||
| 21 July 2008 | ||||||||||
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This poem came out of an "ugly/pretty" exercise -- either to write prettily about something ugly, or to write uglily about something pretty. And yes, "uglily" is not a word, but I like the sound. As you can see from my poem below, I am very into the way things sound... Thanks in advance for the feedback! It began a bump-lump, sleek-lovely swell Decorating the palm of my hand. Smooth sector of raveled love line Tip-touched only by my middle finger. It grew bolder, pinker, ruddy with life, Caressed by pads, palms, knuckles, thumb. Warm worrystone Rubbed religiously But overnight Queen Anne’s Lace bloomed. Slick knoll cranny-nooked into warren Luster-lit from within. Froth-white zenith, spring-green core, Sheerly clear caverns queried by lips and tongue. Rough pelt felt by tender-smooth skin. Serrated summit surveyed by coarse tooth— Lick, gnaw, nick. Touch, suck. Glistening shamefully, Obscuring the palm of my hand. I chomp-chewed the gelatinous root. I twist-pulled the luminous protuberance. I suck-spat incandescent bits of copper tint, And taste. Wart worrier. Wart warrior.
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