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| The Squares | |
| By Adam_S | ||
| 22 July 2008 | ||
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A poem I wrote along time ago about what used to occur every Saturday night at my house for over a year. The title was not by my own choice a girl at college bet me I couldn't write a poem with that title that was any good. I won that bet and I hope you see that too. All reviews welcome The meeting place is my room at six Everyone is coming to get their fix Talking about their demons of the day And how time has made them weary. By seven, things won’t look so dreary We’ll have beer in our blood and speak In tongues freely. Iain and his girlfriend will arrive at around eight saying he’s sorry for being late. And he can only stay till ten forty five because he has games to play. And his girlfriend Lisa’s heart to stratify. By ten the hotel California is where we’ll dwell And each will do things we know All too well. Owen will boast of how his love can not be captured or atoned. And over time this has been shown. I’ll lie on my bed and think of Laura going to Africa when she’s grown. Stephen will say when he’s not with us, he’s all alone. And Stef will chime in with a question or two “Why must you analyse everything we do?”
And when the Iain’s, Lisa’s and Laura’s go away, But they will turn the lights out before they leave And the others who stay will find it easy to breathe. We’ll shout, shake and jeerer But never will we shed a tear Instead we’ll get drunk and sing Wish You Were Here.
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