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foolish plea
By no1butClo
31 December 2005
Your tearful faces
Your weeping wounds
They jeer at me;

Can't you help us?
Won't you heal us?
Answer our call

I reach out,
But my fingertips are lacerated
By the broken window.
It cuts to the bone, and your voice floats...

Fool you were to notice me


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Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 4th January 2006
I find this poem very moving but I can't exactly say why. Could you tell me if it refers to something in particular. Am I just being dense? :roll  
 
spidey

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